Later That Night Page 4

You can skip my commentary and go right to the full comic here.

This is the page that begins Raven’s monologue and I had this written pretty much during the scene in Strawberry Memory where Raven and Wren are at the bar. I couldn’t use it then — it was too long and it would have completely derailed the story, but I thought it would be suited better as sort of a middle of the night thing to say when it’s more OK to be completely honest. Unfortunately it’s not that exciting — I thought it would be best for Raven to never face Wren during the dialogue so she always keeps her back to her.

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