HAttiE – Midnight Page 13

The next page. I originally had dialogue for it, but when I finished the art on the page I wondered if the dialogue was necessary or distracting. I asked the supporters on Patreon for their opinion, and the people who responded said it looked better as is, so I left the dialogue out. Now that I look at it, it does add a sense of silence and suspense. I have to be more confident about using the images to tell the story, as I tend to feel like I have to explain everything.

HAttie - Midnight Page 14
HAttiE - Midnight Page 12

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