You can skip my commentary and go right to the full comic here. Finished! I’m really happy to have a second completed comic on this site — it’s a rare event I complete anything so it feels good to put this aside. I am desperately trying to avoid starting work on “The Morning After” and make this a trilogy. There’s a part of me that really wants to do this, but…

You can skip my commentary and go right to the full comic here. This is the 7th of 8 pages (as I write this I’m over half-finished the 8th page) and it’s time for Wren to get her two cents into this proceedings. I thought of a few Bauhaus songs to use on this page but I ended up using “All We Ever Wanted Was Everything”, it really fit thematically…

You can skip my commentary and go right to the full comic here. This is the continuation of Raven’s monologue. The question I am asking here I think is “Isn’t this a kind of assault ?” Raven doesn’t say no but she doesn’t feel she has the power to say “No.” If she says no things will get worse, as if this is something she knows from experience. It’s not…

You can skip my commentary and go right to the full comic here. This is the page that begins Raven’s monologue and I had this written pretty much during the scene in Strawberry Memory where Raven and Wren are at the bar. I couldn’t use it then — it was too long and it would have completely derailed the story, but I thought it would be suited better as…

You can skip my commentary and go right to the full comic here. Panels 2 and 4 look like copy and paste panels but they aren’t. The neat thing about going digital is I can use my inked work as a pencil layer and get panels looking relatively the same. I do think copy and paste is not good — the eye can detect it and at times can…

You can skip my commentary and go right to the comic here. When I was working on Strawberry Memory, there was a lot of dialogue I was constantly making and throwing away, lots of subplots I had in my head but eventually had to toss off to keep the story going straight towards the destination I had planned. When Raven starts talking on pages 17 to 18 there was…