The last page of this section. I actually had more dialog planned but I scrapped it because I felt I needed to get back to the nighttime quicker. I really do enjoy writing Marie’s dialogue though. All the pages are updated on the HAttiE site so you can read the whole story there.
The next page of HAttiE. I’m not sure where this page is leading, but in all my drafts for this overall story I never really focused on Marie’s character that much, but now that I’m actually writing and drawing it I find that she has a story too. They’re both having trouble adjusting to their […]
Here in the second page of this part. It took me a long time to do because I had the conversation but I knew they had to be physically doing something while talking, otherwise it’d be visually boring. Having Marie walk over to the window seemed to be a good way to keep the conversation […]
We’re on Page 15 already! The next morning — or afternoon as I should say. I guess you can tell that I like drawing Marie and I wish she was the main character instead of Eric. You can read the completed sections so far on the dedicated HAttiE site at https://www.claycomix.com/hattie/.
The last page of the Midnight part. After the last page I got enough confidence to leave this wordless. In retrospect it’s a better decision because it makes the reader wonder what Eric thinks he saw. YOu can read the three Midnight pages together here or read all the pages so far here.
The next page. I originally had dialogue for it, but when I finished the art on the page I wondered if the dialogue was necessary or distracting. I asked the supporters on Patreon for their opinion, and the people who responded said it looked better as is, so I left the dialogue out. Now that […]